This is a Japanese style of poetry that follows a strict structure where it has only three lines and follow a pattern of;
5 syllables,
7 syllables,
5 syllables.
It is often used to describe nature.
Children worked together in small groups to try and create a haiku poem about 'Wind'. This is what they came up with...
Wind
Wind blows in my face
It whistles along the
green leaves,
It twirls around me.
Qwenton, Caleb, Hwi Seong
Wind
The soft wind whispers
Moving branches on the
trees
Birds fly away home.
Dylan, Kiijahna, Jacob C
Wind
Dancing in the sky
Twirling, whirling in my
face
Blows me off my feet.
Amelíe, Briana
Wind
Wind dancing gently
Roughly whooshing through
the air
Air gentle but cool.
Nicholas, Thomas &
Julia
Wind
Twirling, swirling wind,
The rough wind blows
violently,
The calm wind blows slow.
Marek, Billy, Alexia
Wind
Dancing whistling wind
Wind blowing in our faces
Twirling, whirling wind.
Chloe, Hannah, Hazel
The
Wind
Whistling gentle wind
Silently but violently
Powerful and rough.
Ella, Amanda, Harriet
The
Wind
Violently gusting
Swishing, twirling wind
dances
Blows away cobwebs.
Harry, Will, Jacob Mc
Room 9, I have just spent half an hour looking over the amazing work you have all been doing and I am VERY impressed!! Clever kids x
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