We have tried to capture autumn by using our five senses. Please enjoy reading some of the children's beautiful poetry about "Autumn".
Autumn
Sad
wet grass was sodden like ice.
Big
raindrops fall on me.
I
see green and brown leaves
Wobbling
on the branches.
Wind
pushing in my hair like mum
Putting
her hands in my hair.
Dylan Allum (7 years)
Autumn
Cold
winter breeze on my face
Shivering
like icicles in a freezer,
Ginormous
old trees
Blowing
in the strong wind,
While
the leaves float to the ground.
Big
trees rustling on the roof
Like
possums zigzagging.
Rotting
leaves stuck into the ground,
Tasting
warm marshmallows in my mouth.
Isaac McConachie (7
years)
Autumn
Cold
icy dreamy wind blowing in my face,
I
see coloured red leaves lying on the ground;
Waiting
to be stomped in.
Wind
rustling, whistling,
Moving
like an earthquake
I
taste warm pumpkin soup,
I
smell fresh minty air.
Amanda Dissanayake (7
years)
Autumn
Whirling,
twirling wind
Sends
shivers down my spine
Like
eating frosty cold ice cream,
Bronze
brown leaves
Wiggling
and jiggling
Falling
from trees,
Smelly
smoke rising
From
small black holes of chimneys,
Rustling
bustling leaves from the no longer sea green bushes
Nice
hot chocolate
Spreading
sweetness and warmth
To
my frosty cold mouth
Julia Worthington (7
years)
Autumn
Glorious,
gorgeous coloured leaves
Red,
yellow, orange, green and brown,
Looking
like patterned wings of a butterfly,
Old
stinky chimney’s choking out smoke,
The
cold breeze nearly lifting me off my feet,
As
I‘m crunching on top of the leaves.
Honour Birks
(7 years)
I know we have already left autumn for the year but I thought I would share with you all some of the wonderful artwork the children have created. This art took a lot longer than expected but it was well worth the wait.
The children have completed this artwork in stages. First of all they spent a few sessions making observational drawings of different types of autumn leaves. They were looking carefully at the detail and patterns on the leaves.
The children then spent a session using autumn coloured waxed crayons to completely colour in an A3 page (they definitely built up a few extra arm muscles with the pressing heavily of the crayons on this one!).
Next the children painted their artwork completely black with using a mixture of black powdered paint, dishwashing liquid and water.
Finally the children etched into their artwork their amazing leaves, focussing on the different patterns. They left a black outline around the leaves then spent quite a while scratching off the rest of the black paint to bring through the autumn colours. Here are the finished pieces of work.
Room 9 your Autumn poems are amazing. Such imaginative use of adjectives and so many different ways of comparing and contrasting ideas. They were such a joy and so exciting to read. You are true poets. I look forward to reading lots more of your writing. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteWOW!TOTS AMAZING !!!!!!
ReplyDeleteFantastic poetry and awesome artwork!!! Keep up the fabulous work Room 9:)
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